“I need someone to go
to the
store for me.
I can’t go
outside.
I need to
say inside,”
she sighed with resignation.
“Hold on
to me, dear.
I’m afraid
I will fall.
This stuff
is so slippery,”
she
quivered hesitantly.
“Another
day of more gray and white!
I’m so
sick of this damn snow!
Will
winter
ever end?”
she lamented.
“Look at
them, outside
making
that igloo,” she observed.
“I will
make them some hot chocolate
to help
them warm up
when they
come inside.”
“You can
go down the hill
with me,
honey,”
she
coaxed.
“I will
hold you.
It’s fun!”
“There is
nothing more romantic
than a
walk in the snow.
It is so
silent and you are here,”
she
whispered, as they
walked
glove in glove.
“I’m not
worried about
a little
bit of snow,”
she
retorted.
“I’ve been
driving a whole three months.
Don’t
worry, Dad.”
“It
worked! Wearing my pajamas
inside out
worked!
We have a
snow day!” she
exclaimed,
jumping quickly out of bed
to race for her snow gear.
to race for her snow gear.
“Mommy,
it’s snowing.
Santa can
come on his sleigh!”
She declared
with
anticipation
and
wonder.
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Such different perspectives on snow! It's been interesting reading Facebook posts, tweets, and Instagrams with so many various opinions on snow. Some love it, some hate it, some fear it. Your poem encapsulates all those views.
ReplyDeleteThese have all been my views over the years. Except for the two oldest...and I imagine they might be mine in the future. I hear those voices in the elderly near to me.
DeleteLovely snippets of conversation. I love how they make us think about the voice of each and wonder which one we are. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully shown, those POV's, Deborah. Each one creates a small picture of all the emotions, fear, wonder, delight, happiness, worry. Love your idea!
ReplyDeleteI concur w/ the other comments: POV makes all the difference in how one views the snow. Holding on to someone, both literally and figuratively, makes all the difference in our walks through the snow. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThis would be great to give kids and have them determine who is speaking and look for the clues within the text. What fun this must have been to write!
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