March
19, 2015
Dear
Nancie,
I love you, Nancie Atwell. You were one of my first mentors from afar
that taught me about writing and inspired me on my path to be a writing teacher
and a teacher of teachers. I remember
hearing about Writers’ Workshop from you and from other early workshop
advocates when I spent the summer in Berkeley, Calefornia in the early 1980’s
learning at one of the first National Writing Projects. I remember how this learning changed my
teaching and thinking about literacy learning forever. I remember how “choice” in writing formed my
thinking and how thinking about myself as a writer became critical in my own
understanding of what it meant to be a teacher of writing. I remember learning about poetry from your
books, and back then, when I was afraid of the genre, your generous lessons,
taught me, not only how to teach poetry, but how to write and read and love
this genre. I thank you, as one of my
mentors, for this inspiration. I
celebrate with you as you are honored for a much-deserved award as a teacher
and as a leader in our field.
Yesterday I watched a video of an interview you had on
CNN when you said, when asked whether you would counsel a young person into our
profession, that you did not think this was the time for young, innovative, creative
people to enter into our profession unless they would go into a private school,
because schools in the private sector did not have the constraints of the
Common Core Learning Standards and the assessments that go along with those
standards.
I respectfully disagree with you, Nancie. Now, more than ever we NEED, our children NEEDS, young, creative
men and women to go into the public sector of education. We need young adults
who are passionate and who have a deep belief system about the power of
education that is built on choice and the motivation to love reading and
writing that grows from reading and writing in many ways across a school
year. We need young leaders who believe
that literacy is a pathway to liberty and that want to mentor our children as
they grow competently and confidently on their pathway to becoming literate
adults.
I understand. The
Common Core Learning Standards are weighted down by an evaluation process that
unfairly assesses teachers. Assessment
is often too often and high stakes enough that pressure seems insurmountable. I
worry about the stress that both teacher and child endure in preparing for “the
test”. The flaws in this system are
many.
And I choose to work in this system to cause change so
that an unbalanced movement toward “one-size-fits-all” and
“one-test-measures-all” can be rectified and brought back to a place of
balance. So that schools can be a place
where the love of learning is nurtured and all students can be recognized as
unique individuals.
The writing and reading that you speak about in your
school is a lovely model that is a beacon to all of us who love all that you
have had to offer in the area of reading and writing. I must say, I see teachers and classes in
many contexts through my current educational roles, and literacy and workshop
is being nurtured in public schools across the country, despite "the test". Today I worked with
teachers as we looked at information texts for second graders and had a deep
and rich discussion about ways to develop this kind of writing for
students. We talked about the motivation
for some as they wrote non-fiction texts and how narrative texts motivate others. We spent the afternoon delving
into poetry. Teachers were writing poetry
and learning about themselves as writers as well as developing their teacher of
writing toolbox so that they could motivate young writers to create poetry of
their own. I witness this kind of
passionate work for students almost daily.
I am privileged to be a part of working with many teachers—teachers teaching
pre-school through graduate school, all passionate about literacy and all with
a deep desire to create environments and instruction where their students also
ignite in passion around literacy.
These same teachers muddle through the demands of an
assessment system that measures and names “success” in a way that is, at times, trivial
and demeaning to both child and adult. They do it because they know
there is nothing trivial and demeaning when it comes to educating a child.
Nancie, we are not on different ends of a continuum
here. We both believe in the importance
of literacy and choice. And we see fatal
flaws in the assessment system our schools and politicians have created that do
not nurture learning or the child. Your
answer to young people who might heed the call to education is to stay away
from the public sector because of this pressure. My answer, actually my plea, is to enter
in. We need young, innovative, creative
teachers to step up to the plate and help lead. We need their ideas, we need
their passion and most especially we need their courage to help us create schools of balance, schools where all
children learn and love learning, schools that celebrate and measure learning
in meaningful ways for the students and the school community.
I am so glad you won this award to put the spotlight on
instruction that is best for children.
You are a role model for all of us.
Well done, Nancie. Thank you for
all that you have done for education, in the private and the public sector
alike.
Sincerely,
Deborah Bussewitz
Deborah Bussewitz
Below is the link to the CNN Nancie Atwell interview referred to in my letter:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tR_qW6IuXv0
Thank you to Two Writing Teachers for
dedicating space and time for teachers and teachers of literacy to come
together to share ideas, practice and life experience.
Enter in:
ReplyDeleteMake a difference, as together,
we push up against the constraints
by focusing on the Child, the one
who walks in our door from the unimaginable
in order to find safety in the learning,
and the caring in our compassion,
and the consistency of a day --
for when they return home, the fabric gets torn,
the voices get raised, the learning about life,
skewered, until they dream about tomorrow,
when they can return,
with us waiting for them.
Enter in.
--Kevin, line lifting as poem as comment, in agreement with your post.
This will truly shift my thinking for today and hopefully for always .... to see poetry and beauty in the madness is your gift. thank you for sharing it.
DeleteI hope that today and every day more and more talented people enter our profession! As always I also hope that more people see the value of a teacher who loves her/his job and works to continually improve. It must be such a demoralizing time to be a teacher in the US. I wish you all strength!
ReplyDeleteI hope that today and every day more and more talented people enter our profession! As always I also hope that more people see the value of a teacher who loves her/his job and works to continually improve. It must be such a demoralizing time to be a teacher in the US. I wish you all strength!
ReplyDeleteYou are right-teaching is tough and we need the best. I was surprised Nancy said that on air, but not surprised she said it.
ReplyDeleteYou are right-teaching is tough and we need the best. I was surprised Nancy said that on air, but not surprised she said it.
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing this letter! We need young innovative and creative educators! We need fresh ideas to sustain all of us in this time of unprecedented demands. We need to work together. We need leaders who value this profession no matter where we end up working. Thank you for being brave with your words today!
ReplyDeleteWow...you are so right. I am so sorry for thinking and often saying out loud that anyone entering this "noble" profession now is nuts. More than ever before, we need the passion and drive of young people who are pursuing their lifelong dreams of becoming teachers. Thank you for raising my awareness.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you wrote this post off the comment you made on my blog. I felt you had more to say, and such an passionate voice. When I saw Nanci Atwell's response, I felt the disappointment we are all feeling this time of year. That time is taken from us to test. That our students are pulled through a sieve . We are frustrated and her voice reflected that frustration. But I agree we need to encourage young creative minds to come into this crazy world and do something positive and wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you wrote this post off the comment you made on my blog. I felt you had more to say, and such an passionate voice. When I saw Nanci Atwell's response, I felt the disappointment we are all feeling this time of year. That time is taken from us to test. That our students are pulled through a sieve . We are frustrated and her voice reflected that frustration. But I agree we need to encourage young creative minds to come into this crazy world and do something positive and wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteIt's unfortunate that in the eyes of many teachers, her remarks marred the earlier beautiful words. Of course the schools need creative and smart young teachers to carry on Atwell's work. I wonder if she understands the hurt she has caused.
ReplyDeleteWell stated and I'm in complete agreement! Now is the time to make a difference. Now is the time for excited, young, passionate, creative minds to join the ranks and push forward. I'm so glad I stopped by to read your letter.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Spot on. Necessary.
ReplyDeleteAmen - that's exactly what i wrote about, too - a sad moment for both of us.
ReplyDeleteAmen - that's exactly what i wrote about, too - a sad moment for both of us.
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