The writer changes the world.
Observing the world of others,
she seeks to understand.
Offering her world to others
she seeks to be understood.
She listens to
the cackle of birds
outside her window at dawn.
conversation between lovers
the silence of wind on water—
seeking understanding
in the ripple roar of the sound.
She views
the majesty of a morning sunrise
waking earth in dappled
splendor,
garbage strewn along the roadside,
the sheepish smile of a stranger—
seeking understanding
in the snapshot of images.
She feels
the wake-up heat of spring sun
after a blustery, never-ending
winter,
the embrace of a just-because hug from a child,
the stretch of muscle on water as she swims—
seeking understanding
in the sensations of touch.
She writes all she takes in from the world
and breathes new life in the ordinary,
She writes all she takes in from the world
molding meaning in the meaningless.
She holds the word closely
as the word changes her—
offering the word on page to others,
she changes the world.
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This poem speaks to me. I especially loved your word choice in this stanza. She listens to
ReplyDeletethe cackle of birds
outside her window at dawn.
conversation between lovers
the silence of wind on water—
seeking understanding
in the ripple roar of the sound.
The Silence of wind on water amplifies for me the last lines in the stanza "seeking understanding in ripple roar of the sound."
I love the imagery that it conjures in my mind.
I love your poetic lyrics. You accurately describes what a great writer does. I love the imagery in your writing.
ReplyDeleteA writer "breathes new life in the ordinary" really speaks to me. A writer does change the world one word at a time. Think about how kindness becomes the theme when Wonder is read. Powerful thoughts in a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThe world changes when a writer writes and changes again when the words are read.
ReplyDeleteAll of your thoughts are so true and written in such a lovely way. Thank you!
These are the words that I will hold close today: "She writes all she takes in from the world
ReplyDeleteand breathes new life in the ordinary."
Thank you, Jaana.
DeleteThis poem encapsulates the writing life. The senses are foremost in your words. Intense reflection on what occurs within the writer and around them.
ReplyDelete'She holds the word closely
as the word changes her—
offering the word on page to others,
she changes the world.'
The close of your poem pays homage to the power of words. What a fitting ending.
What a great read on a Sunday morning in far away Australia. Thanks Deb for launching the day of a fellow writer in such a meaningful way.
I love thinking about my poem being read far away in Australia beginning your day. Nice picture in my mind.
DeleteThis stanza wows me:
ReplyDeleteShe listens to
the cackle of birds
outside her window at dawn.
conversation between lovers
the silence of wind on water—
seeking understanding
in the ripple roar of the sound.
As I was reading I thought that I do this with my camera, with a paintbrush and now and then with words. Thank you. This inspires me.